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you kissed me
and i floated for days.
tiny wings were
ripping my spine open,
longing for flight.
a let-down,
the lip-lock was like
pressing your mouth
against the rim of a coffee cup:
you didn't think more of it.
in a year, i tongued a guy
not of your stature.
not my taste.
my wings pulled back,
introverted.
© 14.June.2015
tell me about your first kiss through poetry?
i remember aladdin and jasmine's carpet kiss and spider-man's upside down liplock with kirsten dunst.
i remember aladdin and jasmine's carpet kiss and spider-man's upside down liplock with kirsten dunst.
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well, the kiss isn't mentioned, but this is the first verse of a longer poem
She was young like me
with a sweet face and manner
and I looked at her
and knew I could feel infatuation
probably I was no more satisfying an experience for her than yours :>)
She was young like me
with a sweet face and manner
and I looked at her
and knew I could feel infatuation
probably I was no more satisfying an experience for her than yours :>)